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Anonymous

Jessica I really like this poem! Love what you did with a quirky news story.

I’d suggest cutting the line “And I hope you’d keep those ducks and remember” and end with:

“Because it’s beautiful how the damage can make something perfect.
How I got more meaning from the aching of these knees.
How even though I can’t swim I did it.”