Reply To: Week 2 Posts – November 28th

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erin feldman
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Hello Comrades:
Here is a poem. Sometimes context is nice, right? Until I figured out it gave me nasty migraines, I used to enjoy drinking from time to time. This piece is me dreaming about those days.
I’d love feedback along the logic and cliche lines most especially, but am open to whatever your mythic eyes see, and hearts feel.
xoxoxoxo
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PS. I LOVE reading all y’alls work!! SO much.

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