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holy shit i love this. the language, the structure, the playing with time, the parentheticals. all very good. i read the following lines in particular and out loud i said, “yep, i felt that”

or a singular behemoth ice cube going gong
against the glass
the warm glisten of Bushmills
buzzing down my central channel
toasting tongue to toes.